Tuesday, August 13, 2019

Why I Believe The Earth Is Round


Recently are class started doing our speeches.
I did my on why i believe the earth isn't flat. I did it on that topic because i believed in opinion.Every ones speech was judged by the teachers.
My feedback and feed forward was, that they liked it and that i should of looked away from my cue cards more than i did.
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  1. AnonymousAugust 13, 2019 at 11:56 AM

    Hi there, my name is Muzammil and I am a student in LH3 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like how you Demonstrated a point using a fact. It made me think of how I also made a start with a strong hook in the form of a question. Have you thought about maybe adding some comedy to make it more exciting if not then you could add some more modern examples to back up your idea. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintmuzammilk.blogspot.com/

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    1. AnonymousAugust 29, 2019 at 10:09 AM

      Thank you for that thoughtful comment, I appreciate it.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 16, 2019 at 1:45 PM

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    My name is Angelina and I go to Saint Patricks School. I really like the way you gave evidence as to why the earth isn't flat. I like how you used a lot of descriptive words. If you would like to see my learning my blog is, http://spsangelinat.blogspot.com/.

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  3. AnonymousAugust 29, 2019 at 10:10 AM

    Thanks, Angelina I'll be sure to check it out.

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